Information:
You have some good information although you could add more.
Capitals:
You forgot a capital on the word lava n the main page.
Spelling:
You spelled intrusive wrong on it's page.
Punctuation:
You forgot a period on your intrusive and extrusive pages.
Media:
You have good pictures but you could add a video.
Sedimentary Rocks-
Grammar:
You have a few grammar errors just read over your work.
Information:
Again, good info although you could add more.
Capitals:
Yoho National Park is a place so it has to be capitalized.
Spelling:
You spelled fossil wrong.
Punctuation:
You are missing a period on your main page. You could add a comma on your third point on your page. Yoho nNatonal Park is a place so it has to be capitalized.
Media:
Great pictures but you could add a video.
Metamorphic Rocks-
Grammar:
I found only one grammar error at the end.
Information:
You have pretty good information.
Capitals:
I didn't see any capitalization errors.
Spelling:
The word maybe was spelled wrong.
Punctuation:
No punctuation errors that I could see.
Media:
Good picture although you could add a video.
Add a dash to begin all of your points.
GOOD Job!
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Joe Joltz
1/4/2012 12:38:02 pm
Sorry about some spelling errors my keyboard is messed up.
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