Divergent and Transform Boundary Feedback

12/14/2011

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Feel free to add any comments on my information about things I should fix or add
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Joe Joltz
12/18/2011 04:10:03 am

Divergent Boundary:
- You have a grammatical error on line 1, 2, 3, 4, and 6.
- Add a comma after the word ocean on the first line.
- You spelled separate wrong on line 5 and 8.

Transform Boundary:
- Grammatical errors on line 1 and 4.
- On the second line you wrote "an opposite direction" when it should be "the opposite direction".
- You spelled transform wrong on line 4.

Good Job! These are some adjustments you need to do.
:)

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Superduperman12
12/18/2011 06:00:37 am

Thanks for the feedback Joe

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