1/3/2012
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CONTINENTAL CONVERGENCE Grammar - Good job with grammar. I didn't find any mistakes. Information - You had lots of good information on that page. Capitals - Pacific should be capitalized. Punctuation - You also might need to add a comma in between 'plate' and 'it'. Spelling - There is an 'e' in collides. - Temperatures is spelled wrong. Media - I like the picture you added. - I think that you should think about adding a video. OCEANING-CONTINENTAL CONVERGENCE Grammar - Good job with grammar. I didn't find any mistakes. Information - You had lots of good information on that page. - You might want to add more detail about how the islands are formed. Capitals - I think that Oceanic should be capitalized. Punctuation - You had good punctuation and I didn't find any mistakes. Spelling - I think that underwater is one word. Media - The picture you added is good. - I think that you should think about adding a video. CONTINENTAL CONVERGENCE Grammar - Good job with grammar. I didn't find any mistakes. Information - You had lots of good information on that page. Capitals - You could capitalize Continental. Punctuation - You had good punctuation and I didn't find any mistakes. Spelling - Continental is spelled wrong. Media - I think the picture you added is pretty good. - I think that you should think about adding a video.
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